New Outline

• Girl is scavenging around Junkyard
• She comes across a car and opens the door before crawling in
• She pulls up her pant leg to reveal a bloody wound
• She then rips off one of her long sleeves and puts one of her hot wiring tools in her mouth
• She ties the sleeve around the wound and tightens it, wincing in pain
• She then sits for a few seconds before deciding to try to hotwire the car (more detail in independent research task)
• She grows frustrated as this fails 
• We gradually hear a very quiet buzzing sound from the distance
• And then the sound disappears, everything returns to silence
• She then goes back to connecting the wires, quietly this time
• The sound then returns, much louder this time, it grows even louder to reveal it as the revving of a motorcycle
• She gets an intense look of pure horror on her face and sits fully paralysed for a few seconds 
• Just as the revving suddenly gets significantly closer, she gets it together and throws herself out of the car 
• She sprints as fast as she possibly can, limping in pain, over to a run-down looking shack
• She jumps inside and slams the door shut 
• She quickly crouches down with her back against the door, her hands pressed against her ears and her eyes shut tight
• The sounds of the motorcycle quickly approach the shack 
• The sounds slow in pace as they reach the doorway from the outside 
• The motorcycle starts to circle around the shack
• The girl jolts from shock and follows the sound with her head as it passes by every wall 
• The sound then suddenly drowns out and somewhat disappears
• She sits completely shivering for a few seconds and cautiously takes her hands off her ears
• She quietly lifts herself up and turns around to creak the door open
• She peeks outside and scans her surroundings before fully opening the door to reveal an empty scene
• She steps back inside and leans against the wall, she sighs in relief
• All of a sudden a battleaxe crashes into the shot right beside her 
• She jumps back and screams
• The killer then pulls the axe back out of the ground and holds it above his shoulder, ready to swing it back around to kill her
• We then look in from outside the open door, we hear her screaming as she falls to the floor of the doorway